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IELTS: The pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect in the academic achievements


Anfalia 40 / 56 23  
Oct 27, 2014   #1
Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect in academic achievements. Some students argue that sharing ideas together in a class makes them fully participate as they can, while others believe that studying alone can be achieved in the optimal conditions. Therefore, I'm personally argue that study alone acquires more concentration in obtaining the power through of material.

Majority of students in the same places enable to share materials collaboratively toward the same goals. For pragmatic instance, in United States; one-room schoolhouse dated back through 1700's and was commonplace in rural communities. They would work together to learn relevant materials in an effort to meet particular learning outcome. This method can be discussed in a supportive and understanding environment based on student perspective.

However, studying alone is more likely gaining some benefits for pupils. Firstly, it avoids distraction at class. Generally, an entire course can be derailed by a fight between two students, or by a teacher that simply does not get his points across. Also, studying alone can create own pace. This does not mean that you are a better or weaker student; it means you need to do assignments at your own pace. However, enlarge their own learning in plenty of available time improves their brain development. Consequently, they enable to finish their studying fast.

Furthermore, in my personal argument, the key to have an excellent learning is how we enable to master the lesson accurately in our learning. The quite silent situation acquires our brain to study hard and achieve our learning goal. As young learners, needless to say, whether we are learning in any other type of subjects, this could be privileged to ensure that we create an environment which promotes preferable concentration thus excellent results.

Taking account of all the factors, studying alone or studying in a group create pupil's creativity to struggle in achieving their learning purposes. It is undeniable that studying group is a sense of enhancing the organizational skill. However, studying alone is one of the ways to improve self-independent. Where possible, students are able study in every condition.
bulldog123 1 / 1  
Oct 27, 2014   #2
Studying alone is a lot more beneficial when you are the person to take the "team captain" position. It is very hard to stay focused when the rest of the group does not put in as much effort as you do. Some people in the group may also have different study habits or techniques that may not agree with you. I think that studying alone gives you a guide to make yourself a stronger student. Studying with a group creates more tension especially if there is a chance for debate which can make a student feel discouraged even if they are technically not wrong. Studying alone may not be for everyone. But in my opinion I do agree with you it is more beneficial
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Dec 21, 2014   #3
Pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect (1) in (2) academic achievements. Some students argue that (3) sharing ideas together in a class...
Therefore, I'm (4) personally argue that study alone acquires more (5) concentration in obtaining the ...

(1)aspect to/from
(2)students' academic attainment
(3) As this sentence didn't support the topic well, I would say that this adds no complete idea.
For the sentence, let me give a try: Some students argue that study group expects to everyone participate actively in class discussions.
(4) It is always better when you present this with an active sentence.
(5) more DEEP concentration ON

(1) Majority of students in the same places ...
... environment based on student (2) perspective.

(1) you need more work to deal with the flow of the sentence. Here is an example of a topic sentence: I would argue that students who conduct their own study groups will generate a huge demand for a high level of proficiency in a particular major, as they can share materials collaboratively toward the same goals.

(2)perspectives

However, studying alone is more likely (1) gaining some benefits for pupils.
This does not mean that (2) you are (...) it means (2) you need to do assignments ...

... have an excellent learning is how (2) we enable to master the ...
The quite silent situation acquires (2) our brain to study hard ...

(1)to gain
(2)Academic writing should be written from a third person's view. This means that as a writer, you discuss the topic as an outsider, and the reader also reads your essay as an outsider.


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