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Should we have to always pay attention to the opinions from celebrities?


goku123 8 / 16  
Feb 13, 2012   #1
There is a hotly debated issue over whether we have to listen to the opinions given by the celebrities, and this topic can also be approached by several different angles due to its complexity. Some people tend to support that we should trust those famous people because they are successful, while others seem to have the opposite ideas. After deeply pondering over this issue, I also develop my own perspective. I am in favor of the latter; that is, we do not have to always be aware of those famous people's opinions.

First, fame is not equal to truth. We should know how to judge the opinions from those famous people. There is a well-known advertisement: there is a good, delicious, healthy food called "Smart Cookies" which was endorsed by a famous actor by saying that eating this can be handsome or smart. Therefore, many fans are eager to eat that. Unfortunately, we found this product is poisonous. Shouldn't we be careful about that?

Moreover, our own opinions would not be worse than theirs and sometimes we have to insist them in mind. For instance, Kobe, a prestigious basketball player had said that he created a region where is only permitted to the extraordinary person like him can enter in. Whereas, we know that even though he is good at basketball and also has distinguished performance, he is a little bit like a braggadocio.

However, there must be some people saying that listening to the opinions from those famous people then they can become the same people as them. However, I just doubt that, can we be really like them if we listen to them, follow their pace, and learn their behaviors? Even if we can be more successful like those famous people, why do not we can just concern ourselves more and create our own style and value?

Based on the reasons mentioned above, we do not have to always pay attention to those opinions from celebrities. In other words, I think we have to learn to discern whether those opinions are good for us. It is not to say, of course, that the reasons supporting to other points of view are totally without merit. Nevertheless, I still firmly believe that my own sentiment is much stronger.
cypress 8 / 18  
Feb 13, 2012   #2
There is a hotly debated issue over whether we have to listen to the opinions given by the celebrities, and this topic can also be approached by several different angles due to its complexity.

There is a hotly debated issue over whether we have to listen to the opinions given by the celebrities or not , and this topic can also be approached by several different angles due to its complexity. because this topic can be approached from different angles, it is a complex matter.
bribucha 2 / 1  
Feb 13, 2012   #3
Very good found it intresting just needed some revisions like the above person said
OP goku123 8 / 16  
Feb 13, 2012   #4
Excuse me, I do not know why i should do that revision as you said.
Is there some grammar mistake or foggy explanation?
H_H 1 / 4  
Feb 15, 2012   #5
Hi Goku123,
In my opinion, your English is quite good. . Howver, I'm much concerned if your essay addressed the question correctly. As far as I understand, the question is "whether we should pay attention to...", which doesn't mean "whether we should trust...". Therefore, your first paragaraph seems not to provide good examples and specific reason. Even if the celebrities' opinions are not true, we still have to pay attend to them since the untrue opinions can give negative impacts to a large number of their fans, which can lead them application of bad living styles or behaviors.

What do you think Goku?


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