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Paying teacher basing on grade that students got is not appropriate and not fair


Nov 3, 2013   #1
TOPIC : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should
be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific
reasons and examples to support your opinion.


Everyone is different. Although students are in the same process of education system, learning abilities in each students are not equal. Some students are fast learner, but some students are not. Thus, paying for teacher base on grade that students got is not appropriate, and it is not fair for teacher. So that, I disagree with this notion.

To begin with, in schools, main task of teacher to give knowledge to students, and this role have to finish in time. there are certain period of time for teachers to teach. In these short time, it is not possible for teachers to pay attention to individual students in class. Teachers have to manage to teach every topics by schedule. If teachers pay attention to specific students, their work might not finish on time, and this might make many student miss some field in topics that they should know.

Second, learning abilities in each students is different. It is not possible that they all comprehend all lessons in the same period of time. Some students might understand all topics that they had learnt but some are not. Therefore, testing result are different. This problems depend on how hard study they do. It is not teachers fault. Thus, teachers should not be paid by testing result that students get.

Lastly, there could lead to a big problem if schools pay teachers by grade that students get. That is problem in quality of education. Teacher may not care about how they have to teach to make students understand the topics. Teachers may just give high grades to get higher salary. This problem should not be happened. Therefore, grade that students get should not be in evaluating teacher.

In conclusion, I totally disagree with this statement that teachers should be paid by how much their students learn because teacher could not pay attention to each students in class. Besides, learning abilities of student are different. Moreover, there are problems if paying teacher by grade students get.

Nov 4, 2013   #2
Thus, paying for teacher base on grade that students got is not appropriate

how much their students learn , in my opinion, refers to the knowledge the students acquire at school not the grade or mark they get in tests or examinations

main task of teacher to give knowledge to students, and this role have to finish in time

is to give
have to be performed

there are certain period of time for teachers to teach. In these short time, it is not possible for teachers to pay attention to individual students in class. Teachers have to manage to teach every topics by schedule. If teachers pay attention to specific students, their work might not finish on time, and this might make many student miss some field in topics that they should know.

So these ideas have any relevance to the matter "teachers should be paid " ??
Nov 6, 2013   #3
each students

each student / all students

Although students are in the same process of education system, learning abilities in each students are not equal.

It cannot be denied that learning abilities of students vary from one student to another.

Some students are fast learners , but some students are not.

Some students are fast learners while some are not.

Thus, paying for teacher base on grade that students got is not appropriate, and it is not fair for teacher.

Thus paying teachers based on the students' performance is not appropriate and it is especially unfair by the teachers.
Nov 6, 2013   #4
So that ,as a result , I disagree with this notion

main task of teachersis to give knowledge to students, and this roleassignment have to finish in time

Some students might understand all topics that they had learnt but some aremight not

testing results are different

This problems depends on how hard study they do

This sentence is a bit of confused, may be revised as " This problem depends on the how hard these students have studied

There are some tiny grammar errors in your essays, and you may use more connective words in your essay to make it more smooth!

hope this helps you~
Nov 6, 2013   #5
Lastly, there could lead to a big problem if schools pay teachers by grade that students get.

... very clever point.... you are very correct!
Lastly, the school administration would run into many problems if the payment of the teachers is going to be based on how the children would perform at the examinations.

That is problem in quality of education. Teacher may not care about how they have to teach to make students understand the topics. Teachers may just give high grades to get higher salary.

This situation may tempt the teachers to exploit the assessment criterion at the examinations. They may give higher marks than what students actually deserve in order to have their salaries improved. This situation also would result in teachers making the least attempt to improve their teaching skills and teaching methods that would benefit students.

. This problem should not be happened. Therefore, grade that students get should not be in evaluating teacher.

You do not have to say this here. The conclusion is meant for that and take this idea to the conclusion.


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