You write well. A few edits do I find.
The
given line graph illustrates a
reserachresearchdone by a university
lecturer regarding the
number of incidence of X disease cases
found over a 35
- year period between 1960 and 1995 in Someland.
A more detailed look at the graph reveals that
of 100
such cases identified at the
beginning of thefirst period remained steady at that point
untilfor 5 years later. In 1975, a tremendous increase accumulated up to 500 cases was prior to
a considerable increase begun
in 1970. After being flattened at 500 over 5 years, the trend declined substantially and continued to fall until 1990. This
final falling became the most remarkable event considering
that the
epidemic was succesfully completely eradicated epidemic.
Overall, this trend towards cases happening elsewhere declined for a time.the tendency varied declined by 100 cases comparing the beginning and the end of the period.Interestingly,the peak of of the epidemic underwent between mid seventies and early 80s which the trend alteration happened every five-year .
