Such activities contribute to a wide range of manyfacilities from charities to small libraries in remote areas.
... facilities does not seem to be the best word to use there;
Such activities that include charity work, improving neighborhood, teaching under privilege children etc. have contributed to better our society in a large way.Although some people have tried to reinforce the schools to have this curriculum in compulsory education, the disadvantages will be more apparent.
Before coming to this point, you need to educate the reader about the argument. So, you've got to insert a sentence about the argument prior to this.
Despite the fact that all people benefit from such free services , the work for community might be problematic fromwhen inexperienced students are engaged to deliver the services
Hospital volunteers especially from compulsory programs, for example, need to feed patients at risk of aspiration .
.... well, again "aspiration" is a wrong word to use for this idea. Aspiration means;
* A hope or ambition of achieving something: "he had nothing tangible to back up his literary aspirations".
* The object of such an ambition; a goal