, Indonesia's people who start to
marriedmarry in youth age, they try to change their mindset
in this part you should remember that "to" followed by Verb 1.
A small family has some advantages, for example : need simple vehicles if want to go somewhere,
a small family also can
make give disadvantage also , for example
So , if people have no big family they will not do this good habit to meet each other in (what?).
Hi yulis, try to minimize using word "so" in writing task 2 because that's word prefer to speaking style
Overall, people should choose their mindset to have a small family to make their life happy with their wife/husband, children and increase their prosperous to be better in the future until die.
in part of conclusion, I think you should revise that because I found you put new idea in conslusion. Needless to say, in conclusion, we only write the summary from our writing.