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Some people claim that technology advancement is a sign of human progress


Abassdarsa 1 / -  
May 20, 2014   #1
to some philosopher technology advancement is a sign of human progress to others it merely signifies the decline of human moral spiritual and traditional values where do u stand ?

Anosha29 2 / 3  
May 20, 2014   #2
First you have to imply the advantages of technology in our life, not only in our daily life but also globally. You can search the net for it, or read some books about technological advancement then you processed by however and begin the disadvantages. Technology can easy our life but also drain it spiritually. For instance kids these days are not taken outside to play and instead they sit home and plays video game all day. As they're not attending or receiving any physical activities, they might be target of obesity. This is just one example you could arrange it better than I did and expand it, In conclusion what you really feel write about that, whether you stand for it or against it. However you have to proceed and give an explanation for you decision.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
May 23, 2014   #3
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dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
May 23, 2014   #4
to some philosopher technology advancement is a sign of human progress to others it merely signifies the decline of human moral spiritual and traditional values where do u stand ?

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