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Some people want to eat at home, some not. 'in the restaurant is too expensive'

holyboy46 1 / 1  
Oct 9, 2011   #1
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants.Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.Which do you prefer?

People may either eat out at restaurantsor prepare and eat at home.Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have.For me, my point will be expounded on the next paragraphs.

First of all,eating in the restaurant is too expensive.
Because majority of people cannot afford simply the standard meal imposed by swanky restaurants.So I usually buy raw ingredients and make the meal for my flavour.The dish is 4 times cheaper than others.

On the other hand,eating in the restaurant makes me feel bland.Once time I had lunch at food stands,which serverd
many of plates-most meals are fatty and high in calory.If I smell the seafood,which would feel dizzy and sick.

Another matter worth mentioning is hygiene. Always sanitarily pernickety, I dilligently follow the cleansing advices of my brother-in-law, who happens to work as a surgeon, in preparing meal. I may not sleep well at night if the food I consume during the day does not meet the strictest requirements set by WHO. I recall the time I found myself gasp at a cockcroach leg lolling in my foodcourt soup. The waitress, who was summoned to face the music, instead of faking a faint, calmly offered a biologically correct explanation that cockcroaches are not good at swimming.

To recap, I definitely prefer cooking to eating out.It is cheaper; it give you greater flexibility in your choices and the ways you prepare food.Self-cooking is also a good personal hobby, "healthy"in every sense of this word.

mrfrank 2 / 3  
Oct 9, 2011   #2
I think the you should write more about the benefits too and if your supporting eating at home you need to give some solid reasons and write more rather then a few sentences.

Also write the pro's and con's of both rather then just concentrating on one.
argentum 3 / 9  
Oct 9, 2011   #3
Le Xuan Thanh, your punctuation marks are terrible. You could take a look at other essays.
OP holyboy46 1 / 1  
Oct 10, 2011   #4
thanks you and I will train more
AcademicEssay - / 2  
Oct 10, 2011   #5
It looks good but i think you should write more, if you are emphasizing on eat and discuss more benefits about eating home. Compares the two and write more on the disadvantages of eating at hotels.
mouna456 1 / 1  
Oct 10, 2011   #6
I think you need to state more points

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