With the movement of lifestyle, family life in the village is not the same experience as in the big city, because the community is small which people solely know a few people in their circumstances. While, some people believe that there are benefits and drawbacks of it, I believe that there is a positive impact for this trend.Grammatical error
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In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
Let me rewrite your introductory paragraph.
In the 5 decades ago, the majority of people tended to live in the little villages in which the sense of community was so hard to get on with each other. As time has gone by most people prefer to live in the cosmopolitan cities where the inhabitants do not event know their neighbors. While a small community provides a sense of community which benefits people in villages especially for retirements, a small group cannot create the golden opportunities in term of purpose in the future for young people.