For example, when I was in seventh grade, a teacher who teaches a historical subject suggested going to the museum. There I understood profoundly about what the teacher taught.
this example for the visiting museum purposed is less of coherence. Maybe you can explain more specific about "what the teacher taught"
But the museum give you some chance to feel its past easily
Furthermore, the museum can provide us with many information about things such as period of renaissance and collapse of the country , inventions and arts.
Besides two of this explanation sentence. I suggest you to put additional reason describing the benefit you can get after know about the past information, such as; spirit influence of patriotism that you can applied in your daily, or as an inspirational of art creation making.
My impression as a reader, this essay has "fast track" while describing idea. Prefer to add connecting sentence to introduce reader with different idea forward.