Time flies so fast and
You do not need to spend your time writing this flower language in IELTS writing. It is always good to go straight to the point rather than beating around the bush.
People are more likely to live
It seems that you still have problem understanding the prompt given. A closer look at the question asks you to use past tense, as some sentences are written with past time
In my opinion, to live in rural area has a positive effect such as we will be easier to build a relationship each other.
Also, people would often help other individuals
These two ideas can be merged as to avoid being redundant. Here is the sample: Living in rural area made people easier to build their relationship, and therefore they were more likely to help one another rather than those who live in other areas.
In reverse, It also has a negative effect like they will dependence with other people in the same community.
The converse would be true as they rely too much on others.
live in the small community have a benefit like we can help other people that would become a way for being closer with them.
More benefits such as close and string boundary relationships can be seen if only people lived small community
In spite of that, it also has drawback such people in the rural area more likely to wait for favor from another person.
However, people are more vulnerable to live due to their dependency.
So, it will decrease personal quality of rural people.
This results in personal quality of rural people decreasing.
Hope this helps :D
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