Well, you should include the full prompt with your essay so that we can provide you with more meaningful comments.
some people are blaming a car
blaming cars
the number of issue
a number of serious issues
death
traffic accidents
To begin with, inventions we created are in return on the way to destroy us, even car is not exemption. Everyone want to possess cars because of its privacy and comfort. To compared with public transport vehicles, drivers can create own private atmosphere and can arrange the timetable and schedule on their own.
It's better to open your body paragraph with problems that are caused by cars. I feel that these sentences do not add more value to your essay.
If we count number amount of time spent in our life
Do you mean the amount of time we use cars?
Moreover, smoke car emits
car engine emissions
the main reason of
the main reason for
For example, In Delhi,
Delhi is not a country. You had better link your example with your previous sentence.
was reached to
reached
choose to not drive
choose not to drive
in the not long distance
in a short distance