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Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work"


KatyDao 1 / -  
Jun 10, 2014   #1
Hey you guys , i'm studying ielts test . Hope you can correct my mistake =D . Sincerely thanks:

All of us must accept that no matter whether who you are , each individuals also want to get success and further more . According to some people , the main factor to succeed is hard work . while other feel that naural talent will be certainly decisive element . To my way of thinking , hardy someone was on he edge of success but having the combination between own talent and pratise regularly .

People are God-given talent ought to think they are very luck. Simply because that when they were born they had sole natural ability for their own which helps them have competitive advantages to compete with somebody else . Commonly, the telented people is simplied to get success in accordance with professional expertise more than people without talent. The reason why for this case is due to the fact that they understand clearly and fully neither their strength or passion . This is thing not many can reach it . Christina Ronaldo , who has been the most role model in football , he plays soccer from a Portuguese young boy and win the competition easily .

On the other hand , it is said that " practice makes perfect " and many think that training and practise will reach the highest level which they hope to . When a person so something constantly , they can gradually realize weaknesses as well as remote it far from them . Moreover , the power of practicing is if you are really not aware of your potencial . It goes without saying that is a perfect chance for you to come up with what it is . For example , a good doctor is person who have to work hard and do everything carefully with a heart of gold . This is an amble evidence for success without talent . Therefore , Talent is not the most important one . If you are talented without practicing just a wasted talent .

All things considered , I think that natural talent together with hard work is the best combination for any person who tends to succeed . However , working hard can let you get success in long term . Simply because talented people are supported to make plan to achieve , otherwise they can not get anything.
Vihuynh 6 / 10  
Jun 10, 2014   #2
All of us must accept that no matter whether who you are , each individuals also want to get success and further more . According to some people , the main factor to succeed is hard work . while others feel that natural talent will be certainly a decisive element . To my way of thinking , hardy someone was on he edge of success but having the combination between own talent and practice regularly
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Jul 2, 2014   #3
Well, it is always good to post your essay prompt in full in the text block together with the essay. Then we would know what it exactly requires form you. Just mentioning it in the title is not really adequate for others to provide you with more meaningful comments.

People are God-givenwith god given talent ought to think they are very lucky.
You need to pay lots of attention to your grammar.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Jul 26, 2014   #4
This intro is too bulky. Let me give a try for this intro;

Some people say that success is "10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work"

Success is more likely to be linked with action. While some people say this is true, some others argue that talent seems to be the biggest indicator of success in any field. Therefore, I believe that the strongest factor for success is self-esteem.


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