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IELTS:some people think change is always a good thing but,some others don't

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Sep 4, 2011   #1
he charts give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000,and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs provide detailed information about the number of marriages and divorces in USA,and the percentage of marital status of Americans in between 1970 and 2000.

In general,the numbers of marriages and divorces show rather decrease than increase in 1990 and 2000.Specifically,the total numbers of marriages dropped to 2millions in 2000.However,the numbers of divorce remained in one million in both 1970 and 2000.Apart from this,the number of marriages were in its peak level of 2.5millions in 1970 and 1980.Moreover,1980 recorded the highest rate in divorce which was nearly 1.5 millions.Later,in 1990 the numbers of marriages and divorces declined to 2.4 millions and 1.1millions each.

According to the second chart,70 percent of adult Americans were married in 1970.Meanwhile,in 2000 the percentage plummeted to 60.The total number of unmarried adults rose to 20 percent in 2000 from 15percent in 1970.Moreover, the divorce rate increased from one percent to 9 percent in 2000.However, the number of widowed adults decreased to 5 percent in 2000 from 8 in 1970.

In a nutshell,the chart reveals a gradual decrease in the married life among adult Americans.
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change.Others,however,think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,some people are trying to learn new things in their life for a prosperous future.They always welcome changes into their life.Moreover,these people consider changes are a good thing.However,some others like to remain in their same living condition.They like to spend their lives by doing the same thing with their own perspectives.In fact,both people have their own ideologies and visions about their lives

Specifically,the people,who like to welcome changes into their life,will be more self confident and hard working than others.In addition,they trust in their abilities to conquer their realm.Moreover,they are the people with positive thoughts and energy.Apart from this they believe that the change is essential for a good future.A grown up adult must be ready to accept the changes,roles and responsibilities ,which occurs in his or her life.For instance,a student ,who spends his spare time to learn extra curricular activities,is refreshing his mind for a fresh beginning.

However,some others like like to do the same things in their life.They avoid changes.Most of them are trying to satisfy themselves with their present life.On the other hand,many of them do not like to burn their midnight oil for a good change.Furthermore,the fear to accept heavy responsibilities,which comes from these changes.For example,many of the under paid workers are satisfied with their current job and situation.Indeed,they may not be happy with their economical situation.Even Though,many of them refuse to accept change.

In a nutshell,changes are inevitable in our life.I admit,many of the changes bring good fortunes into our life.However,people must be careful before choosing a change.

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