While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that pursuing college without fee would
The opinion formation is incorrect. The opinion and extent response should be integrated into the reason. It should have been formatted similar to the following:
I partially agree with this statement to the extent that the government should subsidize free education up to the point that....The point is to clearly represent your opinion, with an integrated thesis statement that will be the basis of the reasoning paragraphs.
Continuous learning is the key to knowledge
The only acceptable reasoning paragraph here is the second paragraph, which supports the writer's earlier opinion. This should have been the first reasoning paragraph, with the topics within it expanded into a second paragraph to show the cohesiveness of the discussion.
The writer has presented an under developed essay at this point due to the improper first reasoning paragraph. While it might get a passing TA score, there are other grammar related issues in the essay that may still prevent it from receiving a passing score.