People using mobile phones between 2006 and 2010

mobile phones features usage

The table illustrates the proportion of people using mobile phone for many different purposes in the years 2006, 2008 and 2010.
It is clear that the percentage of using cell phone for making calls was the highest during three years. However, there was noticeable increase in the popularity of six remaining features.

In 2006, The feature accounting for the highest proportion was making calls, at 100%. While the figures for taking photo and using text messages were slightly lower, nearly 66% and 73% respectively. The percentages of playing games and music were less than 20% and there were no figures for people using Internet search or recording video.

Over the following four years, there were relatively changes in the figures for making calls, taking photos and text messages. However, four remaining features saw a significant increase in the proportions of them. The percentage of people using their phones to search the internet climbed to 41% in 2008 and 73% in 2010. There was a considerable increase in the uses of playing games and music, reaching at 41% and 26% respectively in 2010.

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I thinks an introductory paragraph is required , informing about the various functionalities of a cell phone mentioned in the table to establish a connect with the data.

You should not indicate "over the following four years" because there is a clear divider between the years. There is a gap of 2 years between measurements. So do not go so far forward into your representation, only to take it back by using the 2 year skip system in the same presentation. Overall though, the presentation is clear, although some language issues arise. You did not create a confusing report in your presentation. The information was properly presented within the 3 group format, which added to the clarity of the presentation. Good job on the reporting aspect. Avoid making gap year claims in your future essays if you can. Unless there is a clear representation of decades in the image, it would be best not to use any timeline references to avoid making errors.