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The Personality of Candidate Requirement in Recruitment of the Company


SarlindaDS_27 42 / 52 5  
Nov 30, 2016   #1
Some people think when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.

The Job Recruitment Process



It is the opinion of some views that the recruitment process is aimed for selecting the person who has the certain personality such as an innovative thinking and easy to work individually or the individual who can competent to finish his/her works by work team and can obey the rules of his/her jobs. This essay will first discuss why the company needs to hire an innovative and independent candidate compared with the candidate who can give the best performance through teamwork and follow the instructions.

Firstly, there are several reasons why the company needs the people who have an innovative thinking. As we know, each company often be demand for continuing their business which proper to follow the change of the latest era and sometimes they must understand the movement of the market. Thus, the corporate extremely need the employees who can produce the new idea that able to tackle their issues. Usually, the other criteria of an innovative person are they able to work as an individual or unnecessary to obtain fully command of their supervisors.

Secondly, several conditions in company sometimes need the employee who able to create the good relationship in work or it means that they can manage their works by including all of the employees in the company to participate in a certain assignment. Generally, the people who have this typical would be easier to handle the complex task in a shorter time because they will be dominance in persuading their co-workers.

According to my perspective, actually, I think both of criteria have the same importance to the company. Hence, the company should hire the people who not only can be as the creator of the new idea but also need for hiring the people who have the ability to manage the team effectively. However, the massive company occasionally is built by the employee who can handle the tricky issue with their novelty idea and accompanied by the solid teamwork inside them.

All in all, personally I agree and support that both of the requirement which had mentioned above really important for the stabilization of the company. (349 words)
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4770  
Dec 25, 2016   #2
Sarlinda, there is a common problem among the IELTS test reviewers that the term "according to me" or "according to my perspective", is an acceptable academic phrase. That is not so and you have just committed the same grammatical error. The term that you base this on is "According to..." which, by definition means any one of the following:

In agreement or accord with: according to his judgment; on the authority of; as stated or reported by.

As you can see from the definition of the phrase, there is absolutely no way that you can say "according to my perspective" in this essay. Mainly because you cannot agree with your own judgement / point of view / perspective nor state or report something as a secondary source of information because you are the actual source of the information. The use of the term has to do with referring to other sources of information. Therefore, it is just plain grammatically wrong for you to say "According to my perspective". The proper term that you should have used was "In my opinion" , , or "That is why I believe", maybe even "This is why I conclude that..."

The phrases that refer to your personal opinion in a more academically correct and acceptable manner are endless. Just stop using the wrong term for it because it does not show more complex vocabulary use nor grammatical range accuracy. Rather, it shows a lack of understanding of the English vocabulary, lexical meaning, and grammatical impropriety of your essay skills.
nandasharma 14 / 53 9  
Dec 25, 2016   #3
It is the opinion of some views that the recruitment process is aimed....

who has the certain personality such as an innovative thinkingthinker and easy to workcapable of working individually

or the individual who can competentcompete to finish his/her works by work teamteam-effort and can obey the rules of his/her jobs.

As we know, each company often be demanddemands for

@SarlindaDS_27
Sarlinda, there are plenty of grammatical errors and subject-verb disgreements in your article which can be hopefully corrected by yourself after 2-3 through reviews. Please, do post the article again after your self-correction


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