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Writing task 1: Pie chart - The pie charts compare the number of owned and rented houses in the UK


hthesheep 1 / -  
Jul 24, 2021   #1

summArise Information from the charts



The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.
Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts compare the number of owned and rented houses in the UK in terms of 4 categories in two different years.

It is noticeable that homeowners account for the largest proportion in both years and the number of houses increased in 2007.

In 1991, homes owned by UK residents accounted for more than half of the total number of 22 million houses, while the figure for rented homes for social purposes stood at around 25%. Both privately rented homes and social housing shared considerably the same percentage, with approximately 11% and 10% respectively.

In 2007, it is clear that the percentage for homeowners increased by 10%, and remained as the largest proportion on the chart. However, this resulted in a decline of about 10% in the number of socially rented homes and about 5% in social housing. While these aforementioned categories saw changes in 2007, the percentage for private rented houses remained constant.

My work seems to lack comparison between the figures but I still don't know which figures should be compared. I would appreciate your help! Thank you :)



Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,767 4773  
Jul 25, 2021   #2
When indicating more than one image, specify the number of images. For clarity purposes, identify the images by year representation thereafter. An outline of categories are also required to complete the summary.

The comparison points should be based on the trending statement. Since there are normally 2 points presented inthis section (high and low), The next paragraphs can delve into that discussion with greater detail. Each trend can be fully developed into individual paragraphs to meet the discussion requirements. The writer is free to choose whichever points he wishes to compare. It is the comparison analysis that is scored, regardless of feature discussion choices.


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