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[Writing Task1/Pie Chart] World Spending, World population and Consumption of Resources


Niam01 6 / 7 2  
Jan 19, 2016   #1
The pie charts below show World Spending, World population and Consumption of Resources

The Pie charts displays the comparison of resources' consumption, expenditures based on primary needs and distribution of population in the world. Overall, it is important to note that most people of the world live in Asia. The greatest proportion of expenditure is used on foods whereas the majority of resources are consumed by USA and Europe people.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, nearly a quarter of the total world spending is made for foods while expense for clothing is just 6%. Afterwards, the expenditures for housing and transports are respectively twofold and threefold of clothing's spending. Subsequently, more than a half of world people settle in Asia, 14% of world population lives in both Europe & America and only 10 % of them inhabits in Africa.

Moving to consumption of resources, USA and Europe representing 28% of global population consume 60% world resources, whilst 72% of world people use just two-fifths of its resource.




jvishal 4 / 7 1  
Jan 19, 2016   #2
Hi @Niam01 You have read the pie chart pretty well. The inferences that you drew from the combining the info from charts are good. There are few or no grammatical errors. In the "World Population" chart Americas represent 14%. So Americas might represent South America as well as North America. This might undermine your conclusion Moving to consumption of resources, USA and Europe representing 28% of global population...

All in all, it was a pleasure reading your task!! Keep writing..


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