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IELTS: Planning a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.


Eva Novita Sari 47 / 71 2  
Apr 29, 2014   #1
The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.
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The map shows a drawing of Pellington town. The governments of this town plan a new hypermarket. This hypermarket will be placed in three choice areas.

In general, three areas are crossed by railway and motorway.

The first possible location is in area B. This location is more refresh and relax because it is long distance from industrial areas. However, this place is countryside and it is far distance from many people. Furthermore, in this hypermarket have not many people for buying something. So, it makes hypermarket disadvantages. The second possible location is in area C. This location is in suburbs, near industrial areas, and it is crossed by railway. With the result, sometimes people who are traveling and worker who are working in industrial factory can visit to this hypermarket for buying some food, if they feel hungry. However, this place is far distance from center city.

However, the last possible is totally than area B and C. It is located in the Town Center, near with park, near traffic free zone, and industrial areas. Also, this area is full housing in around here. It would be crowded hypermarket. So, many people can be easier to go to hypermarket because it has near distance. Furthermore, people should not need long time for buying to gain in their household.

To sum up, the last (A) possible area is more recommended because it is place located in center city where many people live and work. As a result, it will be more crowded when it is built.



upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 29, 2014   #2
In general, three areas are crossed by railway and motorway.

explain more
fikri 5 / 317 71  
Apr 29, 2014   #3
Furthermore, in this hypermarket have not many people for buying something.

So, it makes this hypermarket bring some disadvantages.

However, this place is far distance from center of the city.

or you can write city centre

To sum up, the last (A) possible area is more recommended becauseit is place this place is located in center of the city where many people live and work
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Apr 29, 2014   #4
The map shows a drawing of Pellington town. The governmentsgovernment of this town plan a new hypermarket. This hypermarket will be placed in three choice areas.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.
The map shows a drawing of Pellington town. The governments of this town plan a new hypermarket. This hypermarket will be placed in three choice areas.

It's good you introduce the map very briefly in one or maximum two sentences;
The diagram shows map of Pellington, which has a population of 120000 people, and its proposed sites for a new hypermarket , A, B and C.
Also, do no include any idea in your writing other than what the diagram has presented.
tiaDS 73 / 235 52  
Apr 29, 2014   #5
In general, three areas are crossed by railway and motorway.

Are you sure with this statement? only two areas (A and C) is accrosed railway and motorway crosses area B.
There are three areas where have been recomended areas for a new hypermart.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 29, 2014   #6
Remember: Bring simplicity and clarity. Do not make yourself too complicated :D
upinipin 32 / 49 1  
Apr 30, 2014   #7
The governments of this town plan a new hypermarket
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
May 1, 2014   #8
The governments of this town plan a new hypermarket.

In this diagram, there is no reference to governments. So, you should not touch on anything that is not mentioned or presented in the diagram as this is a report writing task, of which the scope is limited to reporting only what is presented by the diagram.

However, the lastleast possible locations areis totally than area B and C.
The above sentence does not deliver a clear idea.... you need to rephrase that :(


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