Despite all these positive aspects, I think that the popularity of mobile phones to the young generation is a bad development.
Despite all these positive aspects, I
strongly believe that the popularity of mobile phones to the young generation is a bad development.
You can use other phrases, "think" is not an academic word.
leaving them lesser time for their studies and other school activities.
Less time
Similarly, internet capable phones help influence the young ones to become more interested in chatting and social sites rather than doing school works
Internet capable have an influence on the young ....