Heloo Dumi..., It has been 2 weeks from the off since I posted this writing. I really expect this two-way interact with you :D
Yes. I also felt this
Well, this whole para is totally out of topic.
. From the first para
, what I tend to emphasize is to show the readers the current issue regarding the topic of the prompt. Then, coming the second para
, here did I write for the topic
a career woman is mostly blamed for current condition when level of juvenile delinquency is increasing.Is this (para 1 & 2) not good paragraph constructions? or can this fairly uncommon way be an acceptable offer because this is closely linked into the following paras particularly focusing on the topic given?
Very much thank you, Dumi :)