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'potatoes and fish are the main ingredients' - Fish pie manufacturing diagrams


angga93 42 / 74 20  
Apr 1, 2016   #1
The diagrams illustrate the frozen fish pie production in a factory. Overall, it can be seen that a fish pie consist of 4 ingredients in a container. At a first glance, it is made through 2 major stages, which are preparation and packaging.

The main ingredients of fish pie are potato and fish. The fish is putted in a microwaveable container along with additional ingredients such as peas and sauce. The top side of this mixture is covered by a layer of sliced potatoes.

Turning to manufacturing process, the first stage of making fish pie is preparation of the main ingredients. Delivered potatoes have to be processed before a month of its arrival. The potatoes is washed in cleaning machines before those are peeled and separated from its skin. Once peeled, the potatoes are sliced then boiled. The boiled potatoes than chilled and stored before it is used.

Meanwhile, the fish must be prepared less than 12 hours after its delivery. Lemon juice and salt are added to the fish before it is steamed in oven. Its skin and bones are removed from the cooked fish. Once it is inspected, the fish is ready to be combined with other ingredients, which are prepared peas, sauce and potatoes. After those materials are assembled in a container, they run through packaging machinary. There, the pie is wrapped and freezed before it is stored or dispatched.



justivy03 - / 2366 607  
Apr 1, 2016   #2
- pie is consist of
- At a first glance,
- it hasis made through 2 major stages,
- which are preparation and packaging.

- The fish is puttedplaced in a microwaveable
- The top side of this mixture

- Turning to the manufacturing process,
- DeliveredThe potatoes
- are delivered and have to be
- The potatoes isare ( mind your verb tenses ) washed in - thosethey are peeled.and separated from its skin.( this phrase os not necessary, peeling is the act of taking skin out from its source and in this case, the potato )

- potatoes thanare then chilled

Hi Angga, I left the last paragraph for you to edit yourself so you can practice editing your own work. I hope this is useful.


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