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IELTS task 1 - The power that generated by wind turbine is depended on its location


M3L1 26 / 6 11  
Nov 19, 2015   #1
The diagrams display the plan for wind turbines and its location. It seems that its location determines the amount of power which generated by the wind. Overall, the turbine installed on the hill of the coast has the optimum location rather than one on the horizontal landscape.

The domestic turbines which installed on the higher position of the shore have a maximum wind strengths. There are several turbines which are smaller than on the landscape location. The wind on this location blow very intensively and the landscape not spoiled it. It can rotate the blade continuously and generate 100 kilowatts power.

However, on the landscape location is solely one big turbine. Its tower is made of steel and the blades are made of fiberglass or wood. The wind sensor is installed in the turbine in order to detect wind speed and directions. It also assembled by a generator that can produce 1.5 megawatts power which is greater than domestic turbines on the coast. The wind was spoiled by the landscape itself, although the turbine can generate a big amount of power but the wind is weaker than on the hill.




eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,197 460  
Nov 19, 2015   #2
The diagrams display the plan for wind turbines PLANNED and its location. It seems that its location determines the amount of power which generated by the wind. Overall, the turbine installed on TOP OF the hill of the coast has the optimum location rather than one on the horizontal landscape.

The domestic turbines which installed on the higher position of the shore have a maximum wind strengths.There are several turbines which are smaller than on the landscape location ( THIS SENTENCE DID NOT FORM A LINE WITH THE PRECEDING AND FOLLOWING SENTENCES. TO SOLVE THIS, YOU CAN SIMPLY DELETE, OR REWORD IT . The wind on this location blowS very intensively ( A COMMA) andthe landscape ( LANDSCAPE??? ARE SURE OF THIS? IF YES, AGAIN THIS DOES NOT FORM A LINE WITH SENTENCES. FIND ANOTHER WORD) DOES not spoiled it. It can rotate the blade continuously and generate 100 kilowatts power.

However, on the landscape location is solely one big turbine. Its tower is made of steel and the fiberglassED or woodEN blades are made of fiberglass or wood . The wind sensor is installed in the turbine in order to detect wind speed and directions. It IS also assembled by a generator that can produce 1.5 megawatts power which is greater than domestic turbines on the coast. The wind was spoiled by the landscape itself, although the turbine can generate a big amount of MAXIMUM power ( A COMMA) but the wind is weaker than on the hill.


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