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The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present)
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes which happened in two places called Meadowside village and Foton. It could be seen that in the first period, the places were separate locations and now there are combined land.
In 1962, Meadowside was located opposite Foton. Both of them were remote areas without residents. For 23 years, Medowside village had a significant development. Super store was built in the southwest the village while Leisure complex was constructed in north south of Meadowside. Then in the west of village was housing estate. In contrast, Foton was still empty land and between Meadowside suburbs and Foton were connected by main road.
Now, the locations were changed becoming a bigger place. In the middle of Meadowside suburb and Foton were established some public service such as hotel, station and business park. The hotel and station were in front of building of business. In addition, railway was added to connect station and old one.
All in all, the laces are more suitable for people live with development in public transport, housing area. Shopping centre and entertainment locations.