Topic : There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? It the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a form of art and many people listen to it. In addition, many various types of music have appeared in the world. In my opinion, traditional music in the past seemed to be more important than international music but now the situation has changed.
Nowadays, the necessary of music is deserved to be a part of life. Firstly, music makes people relaxed. When people got stress or sadness and axiety, they listen to music. As that can be a therapy, so in Korea some people who have disease use music as a medicine. Futhermore, music can be a way to communicate with other people. As people listen to music, they appeal their emotion through music. So people who have in common in music could communicate widely. Finally, music reflects one's culture, tradition and history. In international events, Olympic and Worldcup, many countries play their own traditional music so others may be able to understand other's culture and history.
However, many youngsters listen to international music such as hip-hop, rock and pop. This is because thesedays music accompanies some kind of trend like fashion and behaviour of famous stars. Eventually, traditional music for many people is declining. However, it is not reasonable because some singer or band try to keep the characteristics of traditional music. For this reason, international music is more important than that music. Young people and many countries export their own music to other countries so that music become international music in the world. Then, people in the world communicate each other throughout music at least.
Having discussed the above, international music became more important part of our lives than traditional music and also many countries try to let all people know their own music which can be a part of culture, history and tradition.
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