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Some prefer living in places with same weather. Which do you prefer?


mayraschmidt 1 / -  
Jan 28, 2013   #1
Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

I definitely prefer to live in a place that doesn't have the same weather all year long. And I personally think that always have the same weather is boring. Now I live in La Paz Bolivia and here we always have the same cold weather all year. There are sometimes we have a colder weather as normal, and other times we have a warmer weather as we usually have, but it doesn't make a big difference.

I think is better to live in a place that has a variation of climates, because in this way people can enjoy all the weather stations, for example in summer people can go to swim and take advantage of the warm climate and also in winter be in their houses in family, with the chimney turned on, or children playing with the snow.

Another reason why I prefer to live in a place that doesn't have the same weather all year, is because people have to change the way they dress, and I personally like that so much, for example in winter people need to use boots, coats, scarves, pants etc. In the same way, in summer people need to use sandals, shirts, t-shirts, shorts, skirts, hats or caps, etc.

Other thing that people change with the weather is, the way how they eat, say, when the weather is cold people drink hot drinks, could be soup, tea, coffee, milk, etc.

On the other hand in summer everybody prefers to drink cold drinks, for example a soda with ice, or iced tea, ice creams, frappes etc.

There is also a part of the year, where the climate is not too hot or too cold, so people do not need to wear too warm clothes or too simple clothes, they can wear whatever they want, and of course feeling comfortable. People also can eat and drink whatever they want, could be a hot or cold tea for example.

In conclusion I think that is better to live in a place that has a variation of climates, because there are so many activities along the year, that everybody can enjoy an take advantage of.

shaonislam 2 / 4  
Jan 28, 2013   #2
Overall, it is good essay, but you do have some grammatical errors. I wanted to point out that I think you shouldn't start out by answering the question directly. You can state your thesis, but having it sound like you're answering the question straight up seem quite silly (just my opinion though).
tiff_007 4 / 7  
Jan 31, 2013   #3
And I personally think that always havehaving the same weather is rather boring. Now I currently live in La Paz, Bolivia and here we always have the same cold weather all year long .

There are sometimes we have a colder weather as normal, and other times we have a warmer weather as we usually have, but it doesn't make a big difference . I found this sentence confusing.. trying clarifying it..

I thinkThe reason why it is better to live in a place that has a variation of climates, is because in this way people can enjoy all the weather stations.F or example, in the summer people can go tofor swims and take advantage of the warm climate and.alsoI n winter people can be in their houseshomesin family , with thetheir chimney turned on or with their children playing with the snow.

Another reason as to why I prefer to live in a placelocation that doesn't have the same weather all year, is because people have to change the way they dress.and I personally like that so much, for example in the winter people need to use boots, coats, scarves, pants etc. In the same way, in summer people need to use sandals, shirts, t-shirts, shorts, skirts, hats or caps, etc. This sentence is too long. I think you should name only 2 - 3 garments that you enjoy wearing and why, instead of listing everything.

OtherAlso something that people changes with the weather is the way how they eatfood people eat.say,W hen the weather is cold people oftendrinkorder hot drinks andcould be soup., tea, coffee, milk, etc.

On the other hand in summer everybody prefers to drinkorder cold drinks, for examplesuch as a soda with ice, iced tea, ice creams , frappes, etc.

There is also a part of the year, where the climate is not too hot or too cold, so people do not need to wear toowarmheavy clothes or toolight clothes, they can wear whatever they want, andwhile of course feeling comfortable. People also can eat and drink whatever they want, could be a hot or cold tea for example.

In conclusion I thinkbelieve that is better to live in a place that has a variation of climates, because there are so many activities along the year, that everybody can enjoy an take advantage of.

Okay so i tried here.. I know i didn't get to everything but I TRIED!
Go over and improve on some sentences.. your examples are good but not well written. I hope this helped(:
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Feb 1, 2013   #4
And I personally think that alwayshavehaving the same weather is boring.

There are sometimes we have a colder weather as normal, and other times we have a warmer weather as we usually have, but it doesn't make a big difference.

... your previous sentence says you generally have a colder weather throughout the year. This highlighted part says the opposite... This tends to confuse the reader :(

I think is better to live in a place that has a variationvariety of climates, because in this way people can enjoy all the weather stationsconditions , for example in summer people can go to swim and take advantage of the warm climate and also in winter be in their houses in family, with the chimney turned on, or children playing with the snow.

This seems to be one para in your essay. However, your whole para is just one sentence :( ... This is what I suggest;
I think it is interesting to live in a place which has different weather conditions. This makes people to look forward to new changes in life and break monotonousness. For example, during summer people can enjoy going out with families and enjoy warmer climates. Then when the autumn breaks in they know they are heading for winter and start getting ready for colder weather. This keep people active and bring in changes to their lives.


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