What app Mimi, please give the picture, i have suggestions to your introduction paragraph.
you could use this pattern :
1. Reserve some of the information, paraphrase and use some synonyms.
2. Overview the information
I hope that my suggestions help.
The process of milk making on some dairy products such ...
The picture depicts the process of making milk which have some process starting cheese to milk. Overall, it can be seen that although the first five stages are similar for both products, while the process of making differs in the final stage which can be consume be many kind of product.