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Producing Fuel from Corn - Writing task 1 - part 1 - Flow Chart


tranghinh 1 / -  
Jun 22, 2020   #1
[FLOW CHART]

THE PROCESS OF PRODUCING FUEL FROM CORN



The diagram describes the way of producing ethanol fuel from corn. There are various steps in the process, starting with milling and ending with delivery.

Firstly, the production of ethanol fuel begins with the milling of stored corn. Then, it will be added with water to be cooked for 4 hours and fermenting for 48 hours. After that, the mixture is seperated into two parts, which are solid by-product and liquid.

It follows that the liquid is purified with ethanol during 5 hours to give the finished ethanol fuel. Finally, ethanol fuel wil be stored and used in the transportation.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 10,635 3478  
Jun 22, 2020   #2
There are 2 reasons why I cannot review your essay. The first, is that you forgot to upload the image along with the text. Our policies do not allow us to access images outside of our forum server so students who actually ask us to access images outside of this forum end up violating our forum rules and could be suspended because of it. The second reason, is that your work is under the 150 minimum word count for the Task 1 essay. As such, you would automatically get a failing score because of the percentage deductions in relation to the 50 missing words. Your work also has grammatical shortcomings which would cause additional deductions on your final score. So it would be better if I do not score this essay yet. Instead, I expect to see your next essay with the image, and meeting at least the minimum 150 word count. Let me throw you a bone here and show you some errors in your work. Just so you will be conscious of some errors you made for next time.

Spelling:
seperated - separated
wil - will

Grammar:
Clarity Issue: It follows that the liquid is purified with ethanol during 5 hours - ... ethanol FOR 5 hours.

Again, please remember to meet the minimum word count and upload the image next time. I look forward to completely reviewing your next task 1 essay.


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