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Proof/edit my cause & effect paragraph about unemployment- collegeEnglish


Unemployment

It's hard to live a normal life in today's society without a job and money. There are many reasons why people are unemployed. Some of the common causes of unemployment are due to getting fired, getting laid off, the market economy, and recession due to the economy. For specific reasons, companies either are going out of business or maybe if there are positions that are no longer needed. Consequently, People who own homes are putting them up for sale or the houses are going into foreclosure. For this reason, the rate of unemployment is at its weakest point since the great depression. People all over the world are struggling. Since this proliferation of effects to our economy, Men have to leave their families behind to find work wherever it's offered; most are turning to crime and other negative situations. One of the most life changing effects of unemployment is the loss of income. Especially if they are a single parent and have a large family to support. Having no money means eventually no food, no car, no shelter, and no clothes. It also prevents one from doing many things and activities. In retrospect it causes's one to experience financial, emotional, and personal problems. Unemployment is a serious and touchy subject, to hope it only gets better.

You could make some paragraphs having causes and effects related contents including introduction and conclusion.
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Some of the common causes of unemployment are due to getting fired, getting laid off, the market economy, and recession due to the economy.

For various reasons, companies either are going out of business or eliminating job s if there are positions that are no longer needed.

Consequently, people who own homes are putting them up for sale or the houses are going into foreclosure. For this reason, the rate of unemployment is at its weakest point since the great depression.

People all over the world are struggling. Since this proliferation of effects to our economy, Menmen and women have to leave their families behind to find work wherever ...

This is especially true when the person are a single parent and has a large family to support.

It causes one to experience financial, emotional, and personal problems. Unemployment is a serious and touchy subject, and we can only hope it gets better.

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