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# The proportion of Coca-Cola sales around the World - IELTS Task 1

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Jul 22, 2017   #1

## sales and share prices for Coca-Cola

the pie chart illustrated that the proportion of Coca-Cola sales around the World.According to the diagram,17.1 billion Coca-Cola sold in 2000.North America is the largest market for Coca-Cola,constituting 30.4%.the second largest market is Latin America,which occupied 25.7% of the sales.In addition,Sale in Europe and Asia is the third and fourth largest market which devoted 20.5% and 16.4% sales.Africa and Middle East purchased 7% of the total amount of Coke,which is the smallest market around the world.

The line chart demonstrated that the share price of Coca-Cola in stock market.After a glance,Generally, the price raised between 1996 and 2001,though line fluctuated .In 1996,the price was around 32 pound.In 1998,the share value raised 43 dollar,came to 75 dollar per share.After 1998,the price decrease gradually.Each share descended to 52 dollar in 2001.Overall,price rose 20 dollar between 1996 and 2001.(139 Words)

The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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Jul 22, 2017   #2
hi021132 6 / 11 4
Jul 23, 2017   #3
@frankie89724
I think you have to be more careful when describing the trend.

You need the preposition to indicate the change of the curve.
[In 1998,the share value raised 43 dollar,came to 75 dollar per share]
This sentence should be [In 1998, she share value raised by 43 dollar, came to 75 dollar per share

Another point is that you can use hedging instead of quoting the exact number. There is risk to quote a number but it is inaccurate.

I hope these can help.

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