INTRODUCTIONProportion of factor why production of farmland decrease in 1990s based on main causes and in universe and region is provided by graph table .
INEFFECTIVE AND HARD TO UNDERSTANDYOU MAY NEED TO WRITE :the proportion of factors causing why farmland production decreased globally in 1990s and some regions affected by those factors is provided by the graph.you presented an appropriately chosen information here to be presented as an overviewBODY PARAGRAPHFirst of all, the deforestation
causes CAUSED about ....
This proportion
is WAS less than ...
Beside, over cultivate
have HAD proportion....
On the other hand, North America
has HAD the smallest land degradation
in BETWEEN three regions.
WAS just about 3.3 % IN THIS COUNTRY
. This
is WAS higher than in south pacific which
is WAS no over cultivation.
....
has HAD deforestation factor CAUSING DEGRADATION about 9.8%,
and also WHILE 23% OF this area
land WAS DEGRADED
degradation about 23%.Wherea s, ocean pacific
has HAD
a bad land which causes of degradation [IMPROPER INFORMATION. NO SUPPORTING DETAILS] about 13% of all this region includeD Australia and new Zealand.
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