Proportion of factor why production of farmland INEFFECTIVE AND HARD TO UNDERSTANDYOU MAY NEED TO WRITE :the proportion of factors causing why farmland production decreased globally in 1990s and some regions affected by those factors is provided by the graph.you presented an appropriately chosen information here to be presented as an overviewBODY PARAGRAPH
decrease in 1990s based on main causes and in universe and region is provided by graph table .
First of all, the deforestation
CAUSED about ....
WAS less than ...
Beside, over cultivate
On the other hand, North America
HAD the smallest land degradation
BETWEEN three regions.
WAS just about 3.3 % IN THIS COUNTRY
WAS higher than in south pacific which is
WAS no over cultivation.
HAD deforestation factor CAUSING DEGRADATION about 9.8%,
WHILE 23% OF this area
degradation about 23%.Wherea
s, ocean pacific
HAD a bad land which causes of degradation
[IMPROPER INFORMATION. NO SUPPORTING DETAILS] about 13% of all this region includeD Australia and new Zealand.*did not mention all the features of pie chart. poorly developed
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