PROPORTION OF FOSSIL FUELS CONSUMPTION IN THE US AND THE UK

A breakdown of the proportion of petrol consumption as per three different earning income among citizens in the UK and the US is illustrated in a line chart. At first glance, it is obvious that in the United States, the poor consume much fuel than middle and rich ones, while in the UK, people who have low incomes spend less petrol than other categories.

To begin, low-income people in the United Kingdom consume petrol at approximately 0,5 to 2,7 percent of usage. In contrary, the poor in the US spend petrol with reaching a high of 5,2%. Meanwhile, middle-income citizens in both countries consume fossil fuel around 4%-5% (the US) and 2,7%-4% (the UK).

Furthermore, the level consumption of petrol fuel among wealthy people in both developed countries are virtually same where the rich people in the UK utilize much petrol oil at around 3-4 percent rather than wealthy people in the US at just around 2% to 4%.

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