The proportion of jobless women in 4 different countries of Britain in 2013 and 2014

The number of female unemployment in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014

The provided bar chart compares the proportion of jobless female in 4 different countries in Britain in 2013 and 2014.
Overall, while in England, Wales and Northern Ireland witnessed a fall in the percentage from 2013 to 2014, the Scotland increased sharply to have the highest proportion in this period.

In 2013, there was the greatest percentage at 6.8% of women who could not find a proper career in England, followed by the Scotland approximately at about 6.1%. In contrast, the number of unemployed female in Wales and Northern Ireland was nearly the same at 5.4% and 5.6% consecutively, all at under 6%.

However, in 2014, there were some changes in the percentage. England decreased slightly about 3% from 6.8% to 6.5%, s Scotland experienced a steep growth and reached its peak at 6.7% - still lower than England in 2013. Opposite with 2 enormous proportion of jobless women, Wale and Northern Ireland declined the same times at about 5% and 4.6%, and kept the proportion approximately less or equal 5%. Therefore, Northern Ireland became the lowest country having the quantity of female with no career with the drop of 1% in 2014.

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Do not forget that the task 1 essay always uses plural word references. None of the information that is presented will be representative of just a single person or entity. That defeats the purpose of the summary analysis and report essay.

Familiarize yourself with the way the UK is set up. The countries you provided are all part of the UK member nations. Therefore, they should not be referenced as individual countries but rather, as member countries of the United Kingdom. These are not mere countries. Since you are taking an IELTS test, you have to show proper UK current events and history knowledge when required. You are using improper referencing in this instance for Britain and the other nations.

Use a uniform paragraph sentence presentation. Focus on more analysis of the information rather than just pairing these up to hasten the reporting process. You are afterall being asked to analyze the information as well as reporting on it. So a compliant paragraph should take up 3-5 sentences when offering comparative analysis and reporting.