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Topic: The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first bar graph shows changes in the percentage of residents owning computers over an 8-year period. The second chart compares the proportions of computer ownership by education level in 2002 and 2010.
It is of note that, the percentage of people affording a computer was on the upward trend over the given period. In addition, people tended to buy a computer as they achieved a higher qualification, and this pattern had a significant increase in 2010.
In the year 2002, the ownership of computer accounted for almost 55% of population. This figure had an uninterrupted growth to about 70% in the next six years, and reached the peak at around 75% in 2010, a 5 percent rise every two years.
The proportion of postgraduate students owning a computer had a noticeable higher than those in any level of education in both years, at 80% and 90% respectively. In contrast, inhabitants without any qualifications had the lowest percentage of computer ownership at only 15% in 2002, but tripled the figure to 45% in 2010.