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The proportion of travellers visiting four well-known locations in Brighton UK over 30 years


hientrang1812 1 / -  
Oct 27, 2020   #1

percentage of tourists to england who visited brighton attractions



The given line graph gives information about the proportion of travellers visiting four well-known locations in Brighton UK over the period of 30 years starting from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that at the beginning of that period, festival was the attraction having the highest visitors, while at the last year, the pavilion took a lead. Pier remained the location with the least tourists most of the period.

In 1980, the number of visitors travelling to the festival was around 30%, higher than the figures for pavilion and art gallery, which fluctuated 22% and 25%. The percentage of travellers coming to pier was about 10%.The proportion of tourists visiting pavilion significantly increased from 1985 to 1990, while the three other locations having visitors fell down.

At the last period, pavilion was the location having the highest number of visitors, especially in 1995, the number was nearly 50%. Compared with the number of tourists visiting the festival, which remained stable, was about 27%.While visitors coming to art gallery continuously decreased by 7% in the last five years of the period. In the same time , the percentage of travellers visiting the pier went up to over 20%.
maormendel 1 / 1 1  
Oct 28, 2020   #2
I would use:
over 30 years instead of over the period of 30 years.

Overall, it is clearly seen from the chart that at the beginning of that period, the festival was the attraction having the highest visitors, while the pavilion took a lead at the last year

The proportion of tourists visiting pavilion significantly increased from 1985 to 1990, while visitors' three other locations fell down.

Visitors coming to the art gallery continuously decreased by 7% in the last five years


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