PUTTING WORMS TO WORK TO HELP YOUR GARDEN

Earthworms, a disgusting creature for some people, help gardeners & farmers to turn their crops become better by making compost and put it on soil. You are able to make your own compost from food residue with or without worms. Yet, it is better to put worms especially red worms well-known as red wigglers. Kim Gabel from the University of Florida states "The red wigglers are the best varieties for doing it because they are more of a surface feeder". A container is needed to put the waste food and the worms; and you should make a holes on the composing bin, so it could get some air. Kim Gabel said "the worms do breathe. So that is a very important factor. They also like to be in the dark". Therefore, make sure to keep the bin dark. Aside from keeping it in the dark, the worms prefer a moderate temperature by putting your bin indoor. To prevent unpleasant smell, you can do limitation to the amount of food that you put on it. As you composting with worms, remember to put something soft like sheet, control the moisture not too wet by not adding to much water on it. In period six-month your compost can be used.

Hi jnur, it's a very nice to read your writing. A enjoyable writing. However, you've done some miss-spelling words. Here they are

... by making compost and putting it on soil.

you should make a holes on the composing bin,

Best regard

Hi Jnur!

I got some tips for your essay

Earthworms, a disgusting creatures for some people / Earthworm, a disgusting creature for some people. (a period is needed here) (when you make generalization, make sure the Subject-verb-agreement is totally in sync) helpING gardeners & farmers to turn their crops (...) and put it onblending it on soil.

red worms,(put comma here) well-known as red wigglers.

make a holes

Kim Gabel said "T he worms do breathe." (you failed to put another apostrophy when you use "quoting" in this sentence)

hi Jnur...
let me try to give you some corrections,


the first sentence reveals that you need a verb as this contains a conjunction and subject.


hope this helps,
thanks