In today's life, there is so much traffic around the world and it is clear that traffic is the main reason for happening road accidents.
... .... I think you have misunderstood the topic. It really does not refer to road traffic as a problem (though it is actually a problem). In my view, traffic accidents refers to the road accidents.
And I totally agree with this view as there are several reasons to supplysupport it.
The main reason is that very young or so elder people are not able to drive and I will analyze this supporting idea in the following paragraphs.
... This is a bit confusing sentence. Better re-phrase!
First of all, in my opinion, young people First, young children lack matuarity and experience in driving.
havedo not have enough experience in driving.
I hope you prepare yourself for TOEFL or IELTS. If so you need to follow the appropriate essay structure. Generally, I recommend the 4 para structure;
Intorduction- Introduce your topic +state your opinion
1st Body para; 1st reason for your opinion + specific example to support it
2nd Body para; 2nd reason+example
Conclution; summary of the above
Read threads you find in this forum to get an idea about this essay structure!