In today's life, there is so much traffic around the world and it is clear that traffic is the main reason for happening road accidents.
... .... I think you have misunderstood the topic. It really does not refer to road traffic as a problem (though it is actually a problem). In my view, traffic accidents refers to the road accidents.
And I totally agree with this view as there are several reasons to supplysupport it.
The main reason is that very young or so elder people are not able to drive and I will analyze this supporting idea in the following paragraphs.
... This is a bit confusing sentence. Better re-phrase!
First of all, in my opinion, young people havedo not have enough experience in driving.
First, young children lack matuarity and experience in driving.I hope you prepare yourself for TOEFL or IELTS. If so you need to follow the appropriate essay structure. Generally, I recommend the 4 para structure;
Intorduction- Introduce your topic +state your opinion
1st Body para; 1st reason for your opinion + specific example to support it
2nd Body para; 2nd reason+example
Conclution; summary of the above
Read threads you find in this forum to get an idea about this essay structure!