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Reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. TED summary


hitam_manis 3 / 5 1  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
one of the aims of human beings is good life like happiness, full of money, and having a good relationship. a good life is tremendously crucial to be found by all of the people in the world. Lopez as speaker in TED explains how to reach a good life. He gave three steps how to get a good life. Firstly, finding a mentor. a mentor is a shortcut to broaden our knowledge. Mostly all people who are popular in the world have a mentor like Alexander the great, Bill gates, and Jackie chan. People have to find a great mentor who has 10 times ability than they are. The teacher will guide and give a shortcut to achieve the purpose. Secondly, humble and grateful have to be implemented in ourselves. Commonly, all of the people forget related to humble and grateful after reaching the purpose. It will ruin the achievement. Thirdly, reading books help to extend knowledge without wasting much money. Reading books are shortcut to broaden our knowledge in business major and social life. Everyone wants to get a good life, yet they do not want to follow the rule. Loving your life, doing all the best what you do, and beautifying your life are a motto that is given by Lopez.

abangabul93 15 / 27  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
Hai @hitam_manis, I got some advice for your writing:

1. o (O)ne of the aims of human beings is (A) good life like ...

2. ... explains how to reach a good life (IT).

3. Secondly, (BEING) humble and grateful have...
... people forget related to (TO BE) humble and ...

4. ... want to follow the rule(S).
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 10,110 3258  
Nov 10, 2016   #3
Rahasia, it is really important that you provide us with the link to the article, video, or audio file that you are summarizing. We can only help you with regards to your summary if we are able to read, view, or hear the original source . That way, we can learn about what your shortcomings in the summary are and point it out to you for your reference.

Please remember to offer the original title of the article/video/audio file along with the full name of the speaker at the start of the summary. That information is necessary because it will help you avoid accusations of plagiarism and also, allow you to inform the reader that you will be serving up second hand information since it is a summary essay. It would seem though, that your summary is more informative than the other versions that have been uploaded for review on this forum. The quality of the information shared though, is questionable because of the lack of access to the original material.


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