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Reason For Visit New Zealand: sightseeing, walking, boating, volcanoes, museums


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Sep 14, 2016   #1
The bar chart show the percentage of reason for visit New Zealand. The most popular activity like got some view, also used transport and the last one was came to place that had an education.

Got some view like walking become the largest reason visitor to visit and had high percentage also sightseeing was second. Both this commonly activity in this country. The use of walking and sightseeing experienced 83% and 72% respectively. And other reason for did activity by used transport like boating 50%. It has still bigger than the last purpose holiday maker.

After that there are two last reason for visit to came some places that had an education material which are visiting volcanes and visiting museums. The activity of visiting volcanoes account 42% was only 1% difference of proportion in visiting museums activity. Made it became two lasts reason activity uncommonly activity by visitor with the least percentage.




mdamanhuri77 22 / 35 3  
Sep 14, 2016   #2
hi andhika08
The bar chart show Shows the percentage of reason for visitvisiting / to Visit New Zealand. The most popular activity in there is like got some view views, also used to transport and the last one was came to place visit there that had an education .

Got some viewviews are like walking (...) also sightseeing was the second
The use of walking ???? and sightseeing experienced ...
And others reason for did doing activity by used transport like such as boating 50%. It hasis still bigger than the last purpose holiday make ???r.

After that then, there are two last reason for visit to came come some places(...) which are visiting volcanes volcanoes and visiting museums. The activity of visiting volcanoes account at about 42% ,(...) in visiting museums activity .

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