The best way that people can get into our past effectively is visiting the museums.
I feel this provides a better hook than the first sentence of your introduction.
"The past is the high value of treasure".
....This is not translated properly. How about this?
" The past is the guiding star for your future" ... I think this one goes better with your next idea.
they will be enjoy
.... wrong grammar'they will enjoy / they will be enjoying
Since, the museum is the institution which collects and preserves artifacts or important cultural and artistic relics.
... this sentence is incomoplete :(