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Reasons to support the idea of having new teachers each year

Jasmine999 1 / 1  
Mar 29, 2021   #1

Reasons to support the idea of having new teachers each year

In this day and age, many people argue that students should be instructed by only one teacher during their school time while others support the idea that students can have more advantages from having different teachers. From my perspective, the latter is better for the students.

First and foremost, each teachers with the unique method of conveying knowledge can provide their students different ways of approaching subjects. For instance, there are some teachers advise learners read the whole Ielts reading articles before checking the questions and others tend to do the opposite. Moreover, having new teachers every year will give students opportunities to find out suitable learning method that they should follow for the best results.

On the opposite side, having the same teacher for several years can lead to the boredom among students that distract them from lessons. Consequently, this situation might badly affect the performances of students at school.

In conclusion, although some people may claim that children should follow one teacher, I support the idea that different teachers can help students well for their education.
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Apr 8, 2021   #2
The mere fact that you wrote only 178 words assures that this presentation will not get a passing score. The minimum word count is 250 words. Writing less than that number will result in severe percentage deductions in the TA section. The pre-scoring count for your essay, without considering the other scoring sections yet, will already be in the failing range. Once the collective errors are added up, in addition to the word count deductions, it will be difficult for you to get a passing score in the test.

It is better if you support your perspective with at least 2 reasons that you will be using for your topic discussion paragraphs. That is because the reasons you provide will help support the clarity of your opinion and create a thesis statement for your essay. A thesis statement is a must in all of the academic papers written in the UK and USA. Showing the examiner you understand the format of an UK or USA academic paper will help increase your scoring considerations based on TA accuracy.

Avoid using phrase fillers such as "first and foremost". These are well known phrases used to increase the word count, but not really add to the essence of the discussion. Always start off with the topic sentence instead. That is usually the rest of the presentation you have after the word filler. Be direct in all discussion presentations as these add to the clarity and coherence of your discussion. Always present a minimum of 3, maximum of 5 sentences per paragraph. That way you assure yourself of meeting the minimum word count.

The concluding summary should present the summary of previous discussion. By stating the topic, your opinion, and supporting reasons in 3 sentences, you will manage to further add to the clarity of your opinion and show that you are capable of discussing the same topic in a quick but informative manner, as if you were doing a graded recitation in class.
OP Jasmine999 1 / 1  
Apr 8, 2021   #3
@Holt Many thanks for your advice!

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