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Recently the television has become a medium where people can study about overseas


Wiwik Mujahidin 21 / 3 1  
Apr 3, 2016   #1
Some people say that you can more learn about another country by watching television programmers and film about it than actually visiting them.

How true this statement? Is there anything you can learn about another country by visiting it that you cannot learn by watching programmer about it?


The most recently years television has become a medium where people can study about overseas. Many argue that the screen shows and film are becoming smart tools to study. However, I believe that visiting other countries can make people know more about other countries particularly their culture.

Watching can make people to know more about worldwide. This is because the screen provide many shows and films about other countries. For instance, in China, many people use a screen as primary tool to study about overseas and there people are compulsory to study about foreign country. People in China can speak english and they use it in many aspect. People who utilize television as a resourse study more know about another country alhough they do not go there. Study on the television can make people take knowledge about another countries.

However, I believe that people can more know about around the world when they visit it. The local culture have to be experienced directly. Culture is a habit of the local people in other country and it can be learnt by staying there. For example, in Edinburgh, the custoum comfortlife, people just can know it when they go there, it is difficult to learn if people just see it from screen. Visiting other country can make people more know about another country. People can know more about around the world when they visit it and touch it directly.

To sump up, although people can study through screen, I more likely believe that go to another country make people learn more about their culture directly. Where possible, people have to know more about owner culture.

Desty22 13 / 20 1  
Apr 3, 2016   #2
Hi
Watching can make people to know [...] to study about foreign country.

Watching would help people understanding more about worldwide because screen provides several information related to other countries. for instance, in china, some persons utilize television as tool to study about foreign countries.

trying to change people with other words with the same meaning such as individuals, person and society

thanks =)
LaPolo11 12 / 28  
Apr 3, 2016   #3
For instance, in China, many people use a screen [...] speak english and they use it in many aspect.

actually you write good example, nonetheless, there is another alternative way to make good example.

Take china as a pragmatic instance, in this country many people use a screen as primary tool to study about overseas and there people are compulsory to study about foreign country. People in China can speak English and they use it in many aspect.


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