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IELTS: Regular books will be still appreciated through some traditional readers


nssuraj 1 / 4  
Oct 9, 2014   #1
Hi all
Please correct my essay and help me to improve
Target:Nowadays for many people the internet is replacing regular books. what do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion.

Ans; The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by the internet. As an extension ,today, many people are using this new technology for reading books instead of printed one.In my opinion ,although tomorrow E-book may get more popularity, regular books will keep their place in this society through some traditional readers.

In fact, the internet and its developments have been providing more convenience for the readers. For instance, today, different websites are available with different informations from the historic time to the very latest events. In addition, now internet is available with many types of tools like mobile phones, tablets,etc which are all easy to carry, so people can read from anywere at anytime. These evidence proves that E - reading will be more familiar in the society.

Although, many factors are there to increase the ussage of internet reading, I believe that printed books will sustain in this world. Because, there are many people still feel physical books are more suitable for reading ,especially for long time.To illustrate, continious watching on computer screen will result irritation for the eyes whereas reading regular books for long time mostly not disturb the readers sight. Such veiws are giving more support to my thinking that ussual books will stay alive in this technological world.

To conclude,In this modern world , a large number of people are using internet as their reading mode.But I strongly belive that there is some reasons to keep regular books active in this society.

gbekil 7 / 17 2  
Oct 9, 2014   #2
with different informations

"with different informations "
"many factors are there to increase the ussage of internet reading" --> there are many factors which make the usage of internet increased

there are also some spelling mistakes but your supoorting is good.
OP nssuraj 1 / 4  
Oct 9, 2014   #3
Thank you for your help.As you said spelling mistake is my main worry.
OP nssuraj 1 / 4  
Oct 10, 2014   #4
please I am expecting more commends on this essay
EF_Team [Moderator] 41 / 222 15  
Oct 10, 2014   #5
How many other students have you helped so far? It works both ways ;).
CaptainCook 6 / 14 1  
Oct 10, 2014   #6
if i'm the one answering this question, i would prefer to choose a side. For example, i would like to think regular books will still be relevant in the future and then in the next paragraph i will state my reasons. in the last paragraph i'll state that there is no doubt that E-Book will become more popular but(State again/give reasons why regular books is still important). (*Note this can also work vice-versa)
Misnariah Idrus 19 / 35 4  
Oct 11, 2014   #7
have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by the internet.

Double verb

-- Pay attention on several miss spelling ^__^
OP nssuraj 1 / 4  
Oct 11, 2014   #8
thank you verymuch for your guidline
lephuc 3 / 10 3  
Oct 11, 2014   #9
You have so much spelling errors: anywere, ussage, continious, belive, ussual. In the test, this will lower your score a lot.
you wrote: many people are using this new technology for reading books instead of printed one. But I think 'printed' should be replaced by 'printing' since you've used 'reading'

you also wrote: The last two decades have seen enormous changes in the way people's lives are affected by the internet. But I think 'the last two decades' is something that can not see anything. So I propose you for using: over the last two decades, we have seen...


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