between nature and training abilities
This does not cover the whole opinions in the topic. In my opinion, it should be:
People have different views towards the role of nature and nurture in determining the talent of a sportsperson or a musician.
I believe that children should be properly equipped (by/with what?) and own inborn talents as an example sport, art or music.
This sentence lacks clarity. What do you mean by "equipped and own inborn talents"?
having a natural talent of each child is a special gift
some people were born with a natural talent
It is undeniable that
thesome innate abilities can not be taught by the great teachers or gainedly doing practice frequently
You could give an example to strengthen your point.
as a result of gaining plenty of rewards
. "As a result of" is wrongly used in this sentence.
Nevertheless, he has won a variety of honors and achievements.
Without the innate aptitude, continuous training need be a lot of time and perseverance and without the training, children would not learn how to develop their talents.
You should add "However" at the beginning of this sentence. Otherwise, this is not aligned with the rest of the paragraph where you clarify the significance of nurture in arts and sports.
a strongconnection between education and inborn gift
I'm not sure if you did state it clearly in your essay. Actually, this should be the connection between either nature or nurture and a person's abilities.
Hope it helps!