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A report on the poor conditions of the school cafeteria


PinkyTune 5 / 12 2  
Jan 28, 2016   #1
Task - There is a cafeteria in your school. The cafeteria sells stale food items. Also, the salesman misbehaves with the students. Your school co-ordinator has asked you to write a report on the matter with necessary recommendations.

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Answer:

To: Jenat Miss, the academic coordinator, Daffodil International School, Dhanmondi, Dhaka
From: Soha Farhin Pine, Grade 6, Daffodil International School
Date: 28th January, 2016
Subject: A report on the poor conditions of the school cafeteria

Purpose:
This report briefly presents the information on the poor conditions of the school cafeteria.

The present conditions of the school cafeteria:
The present conditions of the school cafeteria are very poor. Now, our school cafeteria has become an inferior-quality one. Many students are having upset stomach, stomach ache, diarrhea, and such other types of stomach illnesses. The cause of such happening is that the school cafeteria has started selling stale and rotten food items. Very often it is found that the date of the served food items have expired, some are also found with green fungi sticking on top. This results into serious stomach diseases.

Furthermore, the salesman misbehaves with the students. A vast majority of the students are complaining about his arrogance and rude attitudes.

So, it can be clearly seen that the present conditions of the school cafeteria are very alarming.

Reaction of students and parents:
The current situation of the school cafeteria has drawn the anger of several parents, as well as, students. Many of the parents are so offended by this that they are deciding to quit sending their children to our school. Students have to resume their classes being full of hunger and thirst, as they cannot take the food from the school cafeteria. The school authority is being blamed for this.

Recommendations:
Our school cafeteria is in a very alarming state, indeed. The school authority needs to pay attention to this matter. I have devised a few suggestions that may help you in this matter.

The school authority can hold a peaceful, and friendly meeting with the parents. The parents should be informed that the school authority had no knowledge of this problem. The school authority should apologize to them, and also thank them for letting them know about the problem. This would surely cool down the parents for awhile.

In the meantime, we can also change the salesman and fine him for selling stale food items.
I hope these recommendations will be of any help to you. You are requested to solve this problem, as soon as possible.

Reported by,
Soha Farhin Pine
wahyutri13 10 / 13  
Jan 28, 2016   #2
Hello Pine,
Your solution in this case is awesome. You may need a plan to realize your solutions and give some real solutions such as time schedule and due date when this case must be finished. Healthy case is an essential notion, we should solve immediately. In addition, the important point is provide the supervisor for your solutions. Supervisor could monitor solution programmes which you make.


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