Writing a letter requesting for the accommodation - Ielts Task 1: GT

Ielts Task 1: GT:

Q: You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.

Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter
=introduce yourself and your family
=describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
=give your preference for the location of the accommodation

Dear Sir,

I would like to write a letter requesting you to find accommodation in Australia Sydney nearby my office.

My name is XXXX XXX XXX I am married with two young children. Currently, I am living in India. My recent promotion relocated my job base location to Australia Sydney. Therefore I am looking for accommodation over there. It should have at least two bedrooms, one reasonable size garden so that children can find some space to play.

I would like to have a house near by suburban area which should not be so far from city market. Local transportation should be easily accessible and also children school should be not so far.

I have to migrate there within third week of this month. So I hope to get your response with reasonable list of your offers as early as possible.

Thank You

Your sincerely
XXXX XXX XXX
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Dear readers,

looking forward for your valuable suggestions in above ielts letter for GT task 1.

Thanks

Pradeep, the letter that you wrote lacks a tremendous amount of information for the property agent. Please, allow me to provide you with an example of this letter that you can use when you revise your own version. The sample is as follows:

Dear Ms./Mr. XXX,

I am Pradeep X. I am looking for a house to rent for the next 5 years in the area of Sydney, Australia, possibly near the city's business district. I currently work with the Indian Oil Company and we will be bringing our operations to your country in next year. As part of the founding team that will set up the office, I need to be relocated with my family from Mumbai to Sydney within 3 months.

My family and I will need an open concept bungalow house that includes 4 rooms, at least 2 bathrooms, a two car garage, and a reasonably sized yard for my son and daughter to play in. Our budget for the rent is 4 thousand Australian dollars a month. We would like the area to be close to schools and the town center if possible.

I realize that you will need more information from me regarding my family's needs so please, feel free to email me at this address: as@google.mail. for further information. Please feel free to send your property listing at any time. I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.

Pradeep X

I hope my sample can help you revise your letter :-)

Thank You vangiespen for your valuable suggestion.. You way of delivering sentence are really impressive. I will try to add your suggestion in next letter.