The pie chart compares the percentages of different modes of transportation used in Edmonton
the table illustrates the main reasons for
Firstly, it is clear that approximately half of all the people use cars, while around one-third preferred the light rail transit system. However, the figures for travelling by bus and taxi are equally important, reaching 10 per cent for each of these methods.
Also, the foremost reason for using an automobile is commuting to work, at a little over half of the total percentage. Although, it is followed closely by the need to take children from school and business-related activities, being at 40 and 45 per cent respectively. It can be noted that shopping and various lesure activities are the main motivation for 15 per cent of the surveyed populace each.
In conclusion, the residents of Edmonton are especially keen on cars, while they are mainly used for various work issues.
Well, you seem to be following an approach similar to IELTS Task 2 which is wrong. This task is for a different purpose - It attempts to assess your report writing skills and therefore adopt a more formal tone for this task. Do not include phrases like "First, Also, In conclusion" etc. that sound too personal and not like reporting facts. They are ok for the Task 2. Also, after the introduction, have an OVERVIEW that gives an idea of the main trends of your graph to the reader. Do not include any details there and after doing the Overview, move into Detailed paras.