Residents are transferring from rurality to metropolis toward an advanced future

More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life

There is an abundance of residents are transferring from rurality to metropolis toward an advanced future. This essay will tend to give some hardships for staying in large areas and settlements that can be cooked up by government.

One of the staple thing may be a difficulty is obstruction. Nowadays, residents are in favor of using private vehicle, the using proportion of private car increases. However, they may deal with instance of sitting in traffic around 30 minutes to an hour on their way to go for work and back home. Another drawside is high living cost. With development of metropolises, government has an enormous concentration on improving high qualified buildings in a dear price. People who are paid in low can not meet the expense of giving money and usually ought to face with making ends meet.

Numerous approaches can implement to tackle the aforementioned issue. First, government can impose rigorous regulation about charging toll to decline private transport utilization. Moreover, it is necessary to encourage citizens to make use of public transport frequently with friendly energy. Second, in order to reduce pressure on living cost, government may poor money in fabricating more affordable apartments and also have the funds for salary in high for employers.

In conclusion, various steps could be taken to solve traffic congestion and the rising cost of living, which are the two main problems facing urban life.

The first thing that the examiner will notice in this essay is the lack of proper word usage. The test taker is using English words that do not correspond in meaning to what he is trying to say. For example, he uses the word "obstruction" as a reference point for traffic, without explaining what he means by that. Obstruction is not the same as "traffic jams" or "traffic congestion". It carries a totally different meaning that does not help him to clarify his meaning or intention in the sentence. This error occurs several times in the essay, causing confusion for the reader. The examiner will give a failing GRA grade for this essay because of these LR and GRA related errors. These errors will be enough to ensure that the writer will not get a passing overall grade during an actual test.

Add to the problem the fact that he has only written 233 out of 250 words and the essay truly does not have a chance of passing. There will be too many word count deductions in the percentage of the overall score to prevent a passing score. These deductions will be made even before the actual sectional scoring as there is a preliminary score consideration for the word count. Any essay containing less than 250 words will automatically receive word count deductions.