universalnational plan made by government can help us to proceed into the higher education level.
(too much details were pointed out at the end of the introduction. You should mention the reasons why you took this position briefly to encourage the reader to read the rest of the easy)
I am with Ahmad. You should have stopped after stating your opinion. The sentence should have been omitted. Also, when you say "universal" it refers to international curriculum. However, the authorities are responsible for national affairs and the scope should have been reduced to that level.
Those who govern our society have a better knowledge of what is beneficial and what is not for a prosperous economy.Those who govern the country are in a better position as well as with broader knowledge to decide what is best for the country and economy.